On The Death Of My Father Comments

Rhyme or not to rhyme, I like both, well written, David. You have expressed the sadness in every line.

My brain has turned to ash, and yes, My mouth is dust, And love is grief, and death is But the loss of trust; Super line.... this line is touch my heart... lovely poem...

A great line...What now remains of you, I am. Thank you David.

I can fully relate to this piece. Every thing i've been through, thought and felt, is written here. A very moving piece David.

favorite parts: “And dead to grief That death could snatch you carelessly, Some petty thief.” “I must; I will; ” and: “What now remains of you, I am Though poor in creed, ” I appreciated the rhyming, and though I think a poem not so true to the rhyme scheme MIGHT have allowed you to communicate better to me, it is a very personal poem and I liked it. thanks for sharing. bri :)