Thursday, April 23, 2009

On The Day Of Judgement Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the day of Judgement,
The truth was spoken,
It was so harsh,
It left hearts broken.
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A real beauty. "On the day of judgement/ Happiness was not addressed // Because it was like a witch / In a princess' dress" excellent metaphor. Top score and onto Myfavourites.

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Dr. Lubna S. Khan 24 April 2009

written very beautifully!

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Wojja Fink 23 April 2009

Forget all your grief, And you will see the sun Shining brighter than your belief.” oh what a relief to hear someone sing....John

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