Monday, June 20, 2016

On The Crossing Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the corner of a busy intersection where six lanes meet,
I waited anxiously for my brother to pick me up on his way home.
The evening was dry and warm, with an acrid stillness in the air.
The cars with blaring horns sped by me on a hot charcoal road.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2021

A thought provoking poem... the plight of refugees in general is most thoughtfully depicted here in this wonderful poem...5 stars

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 June 2016

No one wants to move from one's own country away from all near and dear. What forces one out is a condition reached when one thinks anything else is better than that. With world full of innovation, development, and cultural recognition, hope such condition is not reached in any region. Yet things have been happening. Great thoughtful poem to bring out the plight of refugees.

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Savita Tyagi 25 June 2016

Thank you Tirupati Ji for your valuable comment. We all wish that no body will go through the forced situations of leaving their home but sadly it happens again and again.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 June 2016

Savita, The problem of refugees is eternal. Right from time immemorial! Think of the criminals and prisoners, the European Govts deported to the Americas- the forefathers of the founders of the US et al. Then there is epic story of Komagata Maru. There have innumerable such flights of refugees within India too, much before 1947. We do find a lot of Marwaris even in the remote villages of Tamilnad, Karnataka and AP, who fled from Rajasthan, may be during the Mughals. Then there is the catastrophie of 1947-48. The plight of the refugees is all the more important now, because of the political crisis, the terrorists and the war against them, their war on humanity. A poet has her eyes and heart and mind open to the world and so, she can not, but respond against all calamities-cruelties, apathy, inertia etc. in the form of her poems. Good poem; with your heart in it. Congrats. Do keep writing and sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 23 June 2016

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. Yes refugee crises or other human sufferings are eternal and so is human desire, compassion and their efforts to alleviate it. None can remain immune to it for long.

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Savita Tyagi 21 June 2016

Thanks Kelly for your supportive comment.

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Kelly Kurt 20 June 2016

A wonderfully worded and descriptive piece that moved me. Thank you for sharing and thank you for promoting the book.

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