Thursday, July 31, 2008

On The Corner Of Nowhere St. Comments

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I'm sitting on the corner.
of,
nowhere,
and somewhere street.
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Barbara Terry 31 July 2008

Ivor Mask didn't get the entire gist of the poem, all Ivor Mask saw was partying and getting drunk. Men! For me I would rather go down Somewhere Street, because at least I know I would be secure as well as knowing who I am. Somwhere Street also has parties, and alcohol, and fun, but not at the expense of security and identity. You really wrote this in a surreal way with vivd imagery, and real life problems. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Nik Morgan 31 July 2008

Live for the moment, life's to short to reflect missed chances.Nice work Ivor

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Chris Newlash 31 July 2008

Great one! read some of my poem you might like them.

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