..On The Clouds, Having My Walk.. Comments
Carefully, I step on clouds
Trying to keep self very light.
I let the air to freely flow
Am deeply breathing
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A rich metaphoric write full of imagery, entertaining as a reverie- well done
Difficult to determing meaning, could be your faith in your palms, or your children. I liked the metaphor of flowing and rolling with the clouds, living life as it comes. Well written.
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7/19/2025 4:02:04 AM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem, very imaginative and gentle.