Thursday, August 9, 2018

On The Buses. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Buses have probably made trains feel a certain rivalry,
since they appeared at the turn of the twentieth century,
after Ford's cars, while trains had steamed on in the nineteenth.
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Michael Walker
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Simone Inez Harriman 12 August 2018

As I enjoy riding on trains, buses and love being driven around in the car while I can gaze and daydream out the window, unlike yourself, Michael, I have no desire to be the driver. What a big responsibility it would be. Additionally you would need the patience of a saint to navigate skinny, pot-holed Northland roads. I enjoyed your poem.10+

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2018

The poem consists of six stanzas and not of one or five stanzas as mentioned by you. I have gone through it in entirety.

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Michael Walker 11 August 2018

Thanks for taking the time to be thorough.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2018

Rivalry taken by bus driver is very bad. It sometimes creates accident such as in New Zealand recently. So driver should drive the bus carefully. However bus journey brings pleasure and provides arrival timely. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Michael Walker 11 August 2018

These 3 bus drivers in New Zealand were not careful enough, although another vehicle, or vehicles, could have been involved in causing those accidents. As ever, thanks for your comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2018

Michael, such a fine tercet👍👍👍

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Michael Walker 10 August 2018

It is unfinished, which I did not realize 'til now. Thanks for your appraisal of the first stanza.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2018

Buses deserved this poetic touch, too. Trains' rivalry with buses is due to generation gap. Thanks, Michael, for giving buses their due.

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Michael Walker 10 August 2018

And thanks for your appraisal of what is only the first of five stanzas. A mistake somewhere in the system.

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