On The Buses. Poem by Michael Walker

On The Buses.

Rating: 5.0


Buses have probably made trains feel a certain rivalry,
since they appeared at the turn of the twentieth century,
after Ford's cars, while trains had steamed on in the nineteenth.

Trams were still rolling down city rail lines when buses appeared,
and took over from them: tramsmust have resented the interlopers.
I personally liked trams and was sorry to see them gradually go.

However, buses are brilliant around cities and for long trips,
giving passengers ringside seats to view the countryside,
views which will flit by like film frames on a screen,

While the driver is at the wheel giving the odd commentary,
but steering the bus like an airline pilot, carefully,
along freeways, motorways and steep country roads.

I very frequently sat back and enjoyed the journey
whether it was on London's tourist, red double-deckers,
or Auckland's slope-seated smooth suburban Go buses.

I thought of trying to get a heavy traffic, bus driver's licence,
as my car licence had no demerits and I was long-time experienced.
I would have been in the driver's seat for a change, on the buses.

11 August,2018.

On The Buses.
Thursday, August 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem tells its own story, without trying to be too scientific and exact in dates. I considered only motorized transport, not horse-drawn carriages. Transport, like all technology, evolves and improves all the time, I think.
Ironically, there have been three serious bus accidents in New Zealand recently: in one a bus left the road and plunged down a bank, fatally injuring the driver. Clearly, there has been serious negligence in the three accidents.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 12 August 2018

As I enjoy riding on trains, buses and love being driven around in the car while I can gaze and daydream out the window, unlike yourself, Michael, I have no desire to be the driver. What a big responsibility it would be. Additionally you would need the patience of a saint to navigate skinny, pot-holed Northland roads. I enjoyed your poem.10+

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2018

The poem consists of six stanzas and not of one or five stanzas as mentioned by you. I have gone through it in entirety.

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Michael Walker 11 August 2018

Thanks for taking the time to be thorough.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2018

Rivalry taken by bus driver is very bad. It sometimes creates accident such as in New Zealand recently. So driver should drive the bus carefully. However bus journey brings pleasure and provides arrival timely. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Michael Walker 11 August 2018

These 3 bus drivers in New Zealand were not careful enough, although another vehicle, or vehicles, could have been involved in causing those accidents. As ever, thanks for your comment.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 August 2018

Michael, such a fine tercet👍👍👍

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Michael Walker 10 August 2018

It is unfinished, which I did not realize 'til now. Thanks for your appraisal of the first stanza.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2018

Buses deserved this poetic touch, too. Trains' rivalry with buses is due to generation gap. Thanks, Michael, for giving buses their due.

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Michael Walker 10 August 2018

And thanks for your appraisal of what is only the first of five stanzas. A mistake somewhere in the system.

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