Saturday, February 27, 2016

On The Beach (Haiku) Comments

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Mihaela Pirjol
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Rajesh Thankappan 07 March 2016

Has the boat sunk at the horizon or just vanished out of sight? I will stick to the first interpretation. After mayhem normalcy returns and we pretend all is well, as if nothing has ever happened.

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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

Sometimes people feel lonely while staring at the horizon, standing alone one the beach.. Thank you for sharing Mihaela... The haiku captures the mind..

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Kelly Kurt 27 February 2016

An excellent Haiku, Mihaela. Perfect in every way.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 February 2016

Lonely Horizon! Nice work.

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