Thursday, September 17, 2020

On The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

With the sand dancing and swirling
The wind playing the tune
The crash of the waves
And seagals flying low
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Pamela lutwyche
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L Milton Hankins 17 September 2020

An exceptionally well-composed portrait of this beach. The imagery and rhyme are exquisite. Keep writing. Give us more like this.

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