*** On The Beach Comments

beautifully penned. Loved it.

Very Very good poem.

Too much grammatical mistakes, too much even for poetic license...! ! ! ! Last line is an anti-climax and suggesting something that hits below. But try your hands. One day you will write surely good poetrry..with so much emotions bubbling within you...

Volleys of ‘Please don’t…’ Jilts…disappointments…discord…? ‘‘am only asking for *** on the beach’.’ These *** speak much…what is that? Enigmatic…! ! What is that 3 lettered word? Poet doesn't want anything but asking on the beach why but? 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK,