Tuesday, February 23, 2010

*** On The Beach Comments

Rating: 2.4

Please don't tie me up in a relation,
please don't ask me silly questions,
please don't take away me freedom,
please don't sweet talk,
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Indranil Bhaduri 27 June 2013

beautifully penned. Loved it.

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Subham Dutta 26 July 2010

Very Very good poem.

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Too much grammatical mistakes, too much even for poetic license...! ! ! ! Last line is an anti-climax and suggesting something that hits below. But try your hands. One day you will write surely good poetrry..with so much emotions bubbling within you...

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Volleys of ‘Please don’t…’ Jilts…disappointments…discord…? ‘‘am only asking for *** on the beach’.’ These *** speak much…what is that? Enigmatic…! ! What is that 3 lettered word? Poet doesn't want anything but asking on the beach why but? 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK,

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