Sunday, December 6, 2015
On The Banks Ravi Were Me And You Comments
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On the banks of Ravi were me and you,
Off course fragrance of the clay was too,
palms were sharing the softness of the clay,
breaths were sharing a hot warm play,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
06 December 2015
The evening had a shade of silky long hairs, the night had stolen the cheek's eclairs, ..Very romantic expression of evening delights mind of a reader even in this English version. Fantastic sharing.10
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7/26/2025 5:29:36 PM # 1.0.0
The repetition of lines......'On the banks of the river Ravi were you and me' gives a lyrical effect to the poem! Aloof from the maddening crowd, the lovers sailing in a boat in the moonlight through calm waters must be a fantastic experience! Loved reading the poem Akhtarji! A 10