Wednesday, April 2, 2008

On The Banks Of The Nile Comments

Rating: 4.5

As the white man plays
The black man begs
For a few spare coins
At the water's edge
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david stansfield
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Ernestine Northover 06 April 2008

Very dramatic piece of poetry, and it stands out beautifully with its lovely imagery. Super write. Love Ernestine XXX

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