Sunday, March 6, 2016

On The Banks Of Maribyrnong Comments

Rating: 5.0

The air is fresh and green.
Between the trees
silence sounds a perfect melody;
the river's voiceless ripples gently tease
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Padma Devkota
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 March 2016

silence sounds a perfect melody; the river's voiceless ripples gently tease the eyes with forms that are set in motion like some untold joy mirrored in your spirit, the river is free to choose its course through belief, disbelief, science or philosophy, through joys or grief. You are philosophical and full of emotions packed in beautiful words....... love your poem. tony

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Padma Devkota 07 March 2016

Thanks, Dr. Tony Brahmin. You are the first kindest rater audience. I should also start rating poems, which I have not done as yet.

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