Tuesday, November 17, 2015

On The Back Of My Front Seat In The City Bus! Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I noticed the message of love
by one Dhinesh to one SaraNya scribbled
on the back of my front seat in the city bus,
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Dr.V.K. Kanniappan
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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

A meaningful poem. The scribbled message on the back of the front seat must be ai work of some adolescent, a 12 th std student as pointed out. The stage in life known as phase of rebellion is that way very dangerous. The boys and girls under it think themselves as some thing special even like superman and waste their energies in useless things. Being victims of infatuation they scribble such messages too and unless they take corrective measures and balance themselves, they may be losers in long run. Very sensitive social theme used. Enjoyed poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 17 November 2015

I am very much thankful for the elaborate analysis and comment.

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Dr.V.K. Kanniappan

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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