On The Altar Comments
Missing you from so near a space
From this short distance I cleanly see your face
Every gorgeous dimple each beautiful line
Spellbound or cursed love to last all time
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This is such a fine poem it brought tears to my eyes reading it....your words took me on a journey...thank you xx Fi
Stunning piece, says so much about the love you have for this woman. The imagery is lovely too and typifies how much she means to you. Great write. HG: -) xx
Dennis, this is a very visual piece. It has a gentle flow which keeps the reader reading until the end. Thank you for sharing it. David
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This is such a fine poem it brought tears to my eyes reading it....your words took me on a journey...thank you xx Fi