Tuesday, January 27, 2015

On That Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your voice lifts me up
To the limit of selfless joy.
And the sense of loss submerges me
Underneath the sea of grief.
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Neela Nath Das
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Rajesh Thankappan 28 January 2015

A nice poem juxtaposing hope and fear. Only on the wings of hope we can lift our mind and enjoy the present despite all adversaries. Enjoyed this powerful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 January 2015

A Beautiful poem on thoughts, which rise as well as fall down on thoughts itself. Again a fear that encircles the thoughts. Beautiful presentation. Loved it..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 January 2015

Mental conflict and the line- The unknown strange fear! so beautiful carved on stone the truth

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