On That Day Comments

stanzas four and six are my favorites. five stars. bri : )

So wonderful and beautiful...... Loving and Heavenly.

A surprise and unexpected of his coming on that day is a beautiful moment of our lives Superb poem

as always, love in this poem transcends the limitations of dimensions.

As usual, this dances in emotion, I am so overwhelmed by your powerful choice of words. But please, open your heart for another stranger to surprise you.ha! Well done!

WOW ' what a wonderful writing, comforting the heart! ! Took me in a place, filled with peace and pleasure.Love to read it again and again! ! The latch was raised, the door swung wide, The captive dove was free ...... beautiful

Wonderfully flowing as always.

This poem has started melting me! Can't compliment enough! Lora, your words work wonders. 10/10.

this is a gem. a wonderful piece. really can't fault this poem, it's got it all. well done Lora.

Euphoria...lovely but ephemeral the enjoyment Strange! ... the warmth of one dear friend Could melt a frozen sea, Shadows lifted, the sun shone bright, On that day he came to me

I like this place you enter A+ (you non-mortal you)

Very emotional poem, I liked this poem a lot. And the rhyme and flow was very nice. Darla :)