On Target Comments

Very true Darren Thanx for sharing this bravo-worthy poem

"Keep trying until you succeed"!

Brilliant and insightful lines, a witty motivation piece written with conviction...

Thank you very much for visiting my page and reading the poems on Albert Einstein.

Dear Poet Darren, Thank you for this impressive poem of hard work and hope to reach the right target.5 stars

Great words of encouragement...i hope i hit my target today. Thank you.

A beautiful write. Thanks for sharing.....10+++++++

Great work! ! Thanks for sharing.

Quite motivational poem... Why pause, lets continue trying.

Very motivational trial and more trial leads to success.

A short but excellent poem... It's nice how both your poems so far use 'sports' analogies... Thanks for sharing :)

Your life goals drive you on. Thankyou

I like the imagery of world is a target board.

Failure is giving up. Thanks, Darren

Only few fortunate find target. You are definite in expression and this is wonderful poem from your nice and wise mind...10

The truth and reality but all these are in a poetic composition..... I like the style.....

The world is a dart board we all try our luck, but, hitting the mark, only a fortunate few succeed for many more it is a struggle keep trying this version is in a western style. not dissimilar. Thank you Darren nicely expressed

Neat poem on target.......adorable.

you have expressed the truth very beautifully, well composed poem, thanks for sharing.

Short and sweet, wisely written poem.............10++