On Stars That Twinkle Comments

This is a very clever construction, it would have been very easy to get lost.

The rhymes are beautiful, love the poem. But without even a glimpse of a woman, Ray.

Very innovative - like it very much.

hahahaha it sounds fun, funny and refreshing, mucha gracias for twinkle to wrinkle Quesada! _Soul

Nice enchanting write which captures the heart. Oh! What rhymes! I loved and enjoyed it. Thanks and wishes.