Thursday, June 30, 2011

On Smoking And Obesity Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some years ago
When one's anxiety was aglow
Would light up a smoke and take puff
Then slowly exhaling, was enough
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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Hans Vr 30 June 2011

A pleasant read. I think replacing smoking by overeating is indeed not a good idea. I suggest mind control and regular reflection, breathing techniques and that stuff are part of the answer

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