Tuesday, May 26, 2009

On She Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why the sky azure
And the breeze cool
How the snake bops
But the lily calm
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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this is beautiful dear sir.

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Antonio Liao 08 June 2009

you have unlock the wisdom of Friendhip....a poem that incense the wisdom of emotion....thank you...one of the great of this century....may God bless you...a 10+++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 June 2009

She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate very lively verses and carries or suaves the reader on........

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She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate... Amidst all she creates wonderful world towatch n to bewatched....10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Very enigmatic writings. Sweet and bitter truths

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rago rago 06 June 2009

simply excelled......... always she seed..........

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Reshma Ramesh 06 June 2009

hmmm....well penned......

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 June 2009

an insightfull poem. shan

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

yes; she seeds...she sees...she knows...good insightful poem, Ashraf...bright...10

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A bittersweet poem extremely well written and philosophical it its loveliness. Karin Anderson

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2009

''She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate'' Indeed, she is the woman, the center point of life.A wonderful poem 10+++

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Abdul Karim 04 June 2009

this is so great, I really feel the essence and the words are flowing all very Meaningful.great Job, keep up.

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Anjali Sinha 03 June 2009

against the azure sky and the breeze cool the melody of 'she' is sung well ill give u a tenner anjali

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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

the words you penned flow nicely.

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Saadat Tahir 02 June 2009

thats the panda tune...real heartfelt nature stuff very cool... verry digg loved it lts ten cheers

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Brishti Mazumdar 02 June 2009

She knows, she knows well Variation of bright and pale Yes, this variation is welcome till the word 'hate' transpired.....good thoughts.

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Ricardo Phillips 01 June 2009

this poem is.......'on she'...fantastic image..10++

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i think i read this beautiful poem before and iam enjoying it again...she knows...10++++

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 May 2009

the meaning swirling between the petal of each leaf. keen observer of nature as God orchestrates everything between them.

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Mamta Agarwal 30 May 2009

lovely composition- so many questions- very vivid imagery Mamta

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Ashraful Musaddeq

Ashraful Musaddeq

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