On She Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

On She

Rating: 5.0


Why the sky azure
And the breeze cool
How the snake bops
But the lily calm

She knows, she knows well
Variation of bright and pale

How the candle lost
But the moon smiles
Why the bird cries
And the plant rise

She seeds, she seeds well
Creation of love and hate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 06 June 2009

simply excelled......... always she seed..........

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Reshma Ramesh 06 June 2009

hmmm....well penned......

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 June 2009

an insightfull poem. shan

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Kesav Easwaran 05 June 2009

yes; she seeds...she sees...she knows...good insightful poem, Ashraf...bright...10

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A bittersweet poem extremely well written and philosophical it its loveliness. Karin Anderson

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this is beautiful dear sir.

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Antonio Liao 08 June 2009

you have unlock the wisdom of Friendhip....a poem that incense the wisdom of emotion....thank you...one of the great of this century....may God bless you...a 10+++++

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 June 2009

She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate very lively verses and carries or suaves the reader on........

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She seeds, she seeds well Creation of love and hate... Amidst all she creates wonderful world towatch n to bewatched....10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Very enigmatic writings. Sweet and bitter truths

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