Scattering the light
Projecting the negative
Representation
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I like your work, but it is extremely hermetic—the fraso subject(s) are known only to you. That's okay, but the poem behind the poem usually garners more reader interest. Dennis
A luminous poem, Angie. Both the title and the haiku are shining the light on a forthcoming brilliant series. If I haven't already said so...Welcome Back!
Robert Frost engaged in this same "rhetoric of concealment", as the phrase goes from a book by a colleague of mine, and I too conceal my subject, usually just the names of actors in my poems at times, other times reveali g the real persons …