There he stands,
As pert as can be
Ruler of all,
In the sycamore tree;
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A turn of the head, A feather to preen A nest to be built, To offer his quee really nice and perfect..as i always said, you are a talented writer john.
The last 2 lines finished the poem in a way no other words could. Very well written.
Really sweet John, I can just picture the little chap - you have captured him perfectly here.