Wednesday, December 18, 2013

On Seeing A Robin Comments

Rating: 5.0

There he stands,
As pert as can be
Ruler of all,
In the sycamore tree;
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John Carter Brown
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Valerie Dohren 23 December 2013

Really sweet John, I can just picture the little chap - you have captured him perfectly here.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 18 December 2013

A turn of the head, A feather to preen A nest to be built, To offer his quee really nice and perfect..as i always said, you are a talented writer john.

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Greg Reiners 18 December 2013

The last 2 lines finished the poem in a way no other words could. Very well written.

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Gajanan Mishra 18 December 2013

standing still, good write, thanks.

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