(***) On Quagmire Comments

for me (the last nine lines) is sitting in a dim corner staring out at an open door (which is the first eight lines) ... a fine balance.

sometimes your way of writing is like a baby tiptoeing on a rope... very careful.. and so what turns out is a beautiful write... i envy your skill.

a wonderful piece....fine metaphor for the pain and love

wow! ammmmmazing imagery! Love and pain entwined! 10++++