Wednesday, November 19, 2014

On Nights Like This Comments

Rating: 5.0

On nights like this, lonely hearts pray,
Life's meaning loses clarity,
The moon lends a sympathetic ear
And I welcome his charity
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Lora Colon
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 10 December 2014

On nights like this, I imagine The pleasures that make love divine, I reach for the forbidden fruit, Knowing it can never be mine An excellent love poem interwoven in the intensity of emotions and feelings.I enjoyed it.Very well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 10 December 2014

On nights like this, I imagine The pleasures that make love divine, I reach for the forbidden fruit, Knowing it can never be mine An excellent love poem interwoven in the intensity of emotions and feelings.I enjoyed it.Very well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 10 December 2014

On nights like this, I imagine The pleasures that make love divine, I reach for the forbidden fruit, Knowing it can never be mine An excellent love poem interwoven in the intensity of emotions and feelings.I enjoyed it.Very well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Akhtar Jawad 29 November 2014

On nights like this, I imagine The pleasures that make love divine, I reach for the forbidden fruit, Knowing it can never be mine The entire poem is a work of art, I was enchanted by the above referred for lines.............10

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Amos O. Ojwang' 27 November 2014

A very powerful poem ever read on this site. Kudos for the diction and its naturality as well.

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Savita Tyagi 26 November 2014

So beautiful. Goes straight to heart. When heart cries out nothing seems to appease. Thank you for sharing.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 November 2014

Lora, this poem leaves one suspended in deep thought, it is simple amazing and beautifully written. The sadness of being apart from the one we love... enough said, well written. Loyd

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