Thursday, November 26, 2009

On My Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

With no shadow and no image,
I wonder on my way,
a figment of someone’s imagination
that disappears in the dawning light.
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David Harris
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Stephen Stirk 05 December 2009

I will be thought of as a dream or a figment of your imagination as I have no shadow and no image to test the light of day. I agree with Sandra this is a wonderful ending to a fine poem. First rate Steve 10

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Sandra Martyres 26 November 2009

'If you see me, I will be thought of as a dream or a figment of your imagination as I have no shadow and no image to test the light of day.' The last stanza of this poignant piece says it all David...beautiful write

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Seema Chowdhury 26 November 2009

your closing lines are wonderful. take care see some of my poems too.

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Carol Gall 26 November 2009

wow love this david shadows 10

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