I cannot fight the dead
Or those that want to die
I cannot will you to life
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Well written, Erin. I hope it is a product of your vivid imagination and not based on real life.
Nice powerful poem. If its real life dont be hesitant to commit him to a mental hospital for a while. He will be fine eventually with your support. Best of luck
Well expressed thoughts and feelings in persuasive diction with conviction.