Monday, July 18, 2016

On My Own Again. Comments

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Walking around this big empty house,
drinking beer, passing the time.
Starring out the grand back doors in the kitchen,
door wide open to the balcony.
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Leah Ayliffe
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Khairul Ahsan 23 March 2019

Thoughts of life nicely reflected in solitude, in poetry lines. The imagery is familiar to me. 'Nothing lasts forever except the night sky' - a common feeling when one is in despair. I loved both the comments below, of our fellow poets.

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Mike Smith 28 July 2016

Sometimes it's important to remind ourselves of who and what we are. Getting back to the roots of things. It's a bit like a reset button, beginning a new chapter with a fresh (yet familiar) perspective

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Paul Davies 18 July 2016

Yes, the old ways and habits just feel like me. A worthy concept. I don't think I was free of that until it had all tipped over so many times I couldn't remember who that was anymore.

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