On My Own Comments

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. You show great promise!

How can he handle all my purity all my otherness all my thoughtfulness. God asked me to try on my own at first.... very good attitude for problems of all kinds in life.......... unexpectedly life becomes what we do not want...... there we stay...... in prayer we find our hold. hold fast on God....... believe, live in faith..... you will find solutions unexpectedly. tony

I asked God to resolve my helplessness and He asked me to first try on my own. Beautiful sentiment, a good inscription to remember for the worse of times

very nice straight lines...candid and spot on for a certain situation. loved reading it... blessings... sat