Monday, February 11, 2008

On My Nerves, She Sleeps(Darker Rewrite Inspired By Poe) Comments

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Centrally from my slumbering lover,
The sound that sleeping dreams whisper,
Breaks my heart, my soul, my back.
She dreams passionately about her affair
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O.S. Brooks
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Laura Bigelow 11 February 2008

wow! is this based on true happenings? i can relate to this, and i know exactly what it feels like. i have written some poems simliar to this if you want to check 'em out! thanks for that. its a great poem.

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