Sunday, July 12, 2009

On My Dead Body An Orphan Comments

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As i look at the sky's apogee
I see the world, world in the eye of me
As i descend where Childs have been
as they say i wasn't seen
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Mohammed Balchi
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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice simile: ''lonely in this tone as my side of the sun rises boys lookin' at me i them despises'' nice poem...10

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