On My Blue Pyre Comments

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, wow, a great poem with so nice lines in a stanza. Enjoyed it. Thanks,10++++

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. Nice to have a poem like this. Thanks for sharing.

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. Nice to have a poem like this. Thanks for sharing.

Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. A nice poem containing so beautiful wording.. Thanks again for your poem. Full marks.

Love and pain! Of my dreams shattered. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Very pathetic, but nice spontaneity, keep working and sharing, poet, thanks