On My Blue Pyre Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

On My Blue Pyre

Rating: 5.0


Here....
In the blue fire
Emanating off the pyre
Of my dreams shattered
Of my desires crumbled
I am burning on
In the self-made bed
Of thorny longings,
Of shimmy belongings,
Of my unspelt promises,
Of my unuttered truths.

With these smokes of uncertainty,
Vapours of dilemmas,
Charcoals of fire
Bones of my existence
And flesh of presence,
I disperse
Into the blue of the space,
Into the blue of the ocean,
Into the black hole of
Eternal time and
Ethereal space.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 13 April 2016

Very pathetic, but nice spontaneity, keep working and sharing, poet, thanks

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Sabita Sahoo 22 September 2017

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, wow, a great poem with so nice lines in a stanza. Enjoyed it. Thanks,10++++

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Sabita Sahoo 12 June 2016

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. Nice to have a poem like this. Thanks for sharing.

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Anita Aparajita Das 07 June 2016

With these smokes of uncertainty, Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. Nice to have a poem like this. Thanks for sharing.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 20 May 2016

Vapours of dilemmas, Charcoals of fire Bones of my existence And flesh of presence, I disperse Into the blue of the space, Into the blue of the ocean, Into the black hole of Eternal time and Ethereal space. A nice poem containing so beautiful wording.. Thanks again for your poem. Full marks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Love and pain! Of my dreams shattered. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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