On My Birthday Comments
On my birthday,
You gave me the greatest gift of all,
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i especially enjoyed the last line: Even not being together.......BUT i'd want to have some contact with the person i LOVE, via phone, email, or other mail! memories of an absent love can be fulfilling up to a point, but, for me, would not suffice. i would probably seek ANOTHER LOVE! i usually do not care much for 'love poems', but i'll send this to My PoemList. bri ;)
Thank you for including this in your My Poem List. Glad you enjoyed the last line, which is the heart of the poem.
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7/28/2025 12:36:50 AM # 1.0.0
Dear Banamala, you expressed love 'in magical words ' even when not being together ' Really beautiful poem, brilliant expression. Sure it will be In my favourite list.