Beneath a rather sensuous moon
They made a trail through the snow
Through the woods
That creaked from cold
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Very romantic and atmospheric. Wonderful, effortless flow to your rhymes, Dee. Loved it. -chuck
I was going to say, 'Better than at the beach! The sand gets everywhere! ! ' Then a horrible thought attached itself to those pine cones.Uuuurgh. Anyway, what colour did the moon paint the snow? (This is going on my favs.) Danny
Dee, I am not sure how you did that! Because, snow is really cold! But, from now on ... when I have to shovel that whiteness, I tend to think that it will have a certain sexy - ness to it!
Dear Dee, this blanket of snow has never felt so warm as your poem makes it so. Love David
Dee, this is so beautiful, couldn't agree more with what Jim says, the snow and the moon, it's chock full of imagery! ! Delicious write..... HG: -) xx
You create the setting and the atmostphere perfectly here Dee. Warm and romantic - intensified by the snow and the cold. Irresistible scenery. A very fine piece of poetry. One of your best.
Tis no wonder the snow just will not stay, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , lol Great write Dee, lots of passion of the season and of the snow, , , , , , , ,
the first stanza sets the tone, excellent use of words to, personify the immagery,