Monday, January 29, 2007

On Moonlit Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath a rather sensuous moon
They made a trail through the snow
Through the woods
That creaked from cold
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Dee Daffodil
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Howard Johnson 11 February 2008

the first stanza sets the tone, excellent use of words to, personify the immagery,

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Chuck Audette 08 February 2007

Very romantic and atmospheric. Wonderful, effortless flow to your rhymes, Dee. Loved it. -chuck

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Diane Violet 02 February 2007

Wonderfully warm and romantic snow tale Dee......

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Danny Reynolds 02 February 2007

I was going to say, 'Better than at the beach! The sand gets everywhere! ! ' Then a horrible thought attached itself to those pine cones.Uuuurgh. Anyway, what colour did the moon paint the snow? (This is going on my favs.) Danny

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Barry Van Allen 31 January 2007

Dee, I am not sure how you did that! Because, snow is really cold! But, from now on ... when I have to shovel that whiteness, I tend to think that it will have a certain sexy - ness to it!

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David Taylor 31 January 2007

Dear Dee, this blanket of snow has never felt so warm as your poem makes it so. Love David

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Brian Dorn 30 January 2007

Beautiful write, Dee... enough said! ! Brian

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Original Unknown Girl 30 January 2007

Dee, this is so beautiful, couldn't agree more with what Jim says, the snow and the moon, it's chock full of imagery! ! Delicious write..... HG: -) xx

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Not a member No 4 30 January 2007

You create the setting and the atmostphere perfectly here Dee. Warm and romantic - intensified by the snow and the cold. Irresistible scenery. A very fine piece of poetry. One of your best.

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Tranquil Ocean 30 January 2007

Warm, sensuous, melting write: -) Love...TO

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Geoff Warden 29 January 2007

Tis no wonder the snow just will not stay, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , lol Great write Dee, lots of passion of the season and of the snow, , , , , , , ,

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