On Midnight Hour. Comments

I'd use " lie" (if i could) , not they rhyming " lay" , but, with poetic license, do have YOUR WAY! to MyPoemList. i wonder if you found the illustration before writing the poem. nice. bri ;)

you have been away over 6 months poetess hope you are well and studied well waiting to read a newer poem

A soulful doleful muse poem on a deserted beach scene all very apt and wonderful in setting and expressing style. Kudos for this superb poem. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

Very well written poetry, I could almost see the images you have painted with your words, excellent.10+

Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. UR POEM COMPARES WITH POET DYLAN CONGRTS NT

While taking her heart where memories lay. On the face, on midnight hour Tears flowing as a rain of shower She crushes all her negative gaze Now her soul is filled with blaze! very gud NR

A marvelous piece of poetry Naila!