Saturday, November 12, 2005

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We met in cyberspace
Can this be a disgrace
Computers filled with numbers
To find a mate for our slumbers
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Gerard Heathcote
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

This is not a well designed poem, nor is it well written. Both the rhythm and rhyme are off. Needless to say, it makes this a poor read. There are other things, but those are the big ones. GW62

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Alison Smith 23 November 2006

There is no disgrace if you meet by cyberspace. Today its to hectic and like minds have no other way To find and bind a union

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Gerard Heathcote

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