…on Leaving Sheffield Station Comments

Adrian, I feel I may have been sat next to you. Wonderful capture.10/10 Ian

Kind of sweet. Sad, of course. The image of your tears merging with the raindrops on the window is touching. When I read a poem that's in a single, long stanza, I feel grateful when I can just follow! : -) I think you convey the sense of being alone on a train journey-'will I walk in those hills? ', etc etc-quite well.