I watch the children
walk the garden wall.
They step too slow,
and then must step too fast
...
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I must add that yes balance is very necessary in life. In fact, life is all about learning how to keep a balance. And one false step, one mistake can cost a lot but others must learn from it.
Wow. That's an old one. It's really good. Takes me back to my childhood. I was also into walking n climbing walls, though now i'm very inactive physically. lol. Loved this piece. You have keen observation.
Nice to read a poem of 1970's pen. Very interestingly written with wonderful judgement of children's playing on wall. Leaning left and right keep them in balance. Interesting reading readers will have definitely....10
Children are the same the world over. Vices develop in adulthood. Thanks for the review and generous rating.
Lovely poem! Falling and rising...learning from mistakes...Though I wonder if children play this anymore!
Here they just play games on their iphones.615