Friday, August 5, 2016

On Leaning Left Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the children
walk the garden wall.
They step too slow,
and then must step too fast
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Barry Middleton
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Leloudia Migdali 07 August 2016

Lovely poem! Falling and rising...learning from mistakes...Though I wonder if children play this anymore!

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Barry Middleton 07 August 2016

Here they just play games on their iphones.615

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2016

I must add that yes balance is very necessary in life. In fact, life is all about learning how to keep a balance. And one false step, one mistake can cost a lot but others must learn from it.

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Barry Middleton 06 August 2016

That is why we must practice.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2016

Wow. That's an old one. It's really good. Takes me back to my childhood. I was also into walking n climbing walls, though now i'm very inactive physically. lol. Loved this piece. You have keen observation.

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Barry Middleton 06 August 2016

Thank you as always for reading and reviewing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2016

Nice to read a poem of 1970's pen. Very interestingly written with wonderful judgement of children's playing on wall. Leaning left and right keep them in balance. Interesting reading readers will have definitely....10

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Barry Middleton 05 August 2016

Children are the same the world over. Vices develop in adulthood. Thanks for the review and generous rating.

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