On Its Two Sides Comments

brilliant poem and the last stanza just made me scribble again. nicely expressed ten plus

Very graphic and well penned 10 plus Tracy

the binaries we carry within us...reads good, eruchie!

Very clever. I like the presentation and setup. Good poem.

Thanks for alerting me about this wonderful poem. It is particularly relevant to my own life at this time, and it lifted my spirit greatly.

good bro... kudos to your phillosophy.. it applies to life.. its like success followed by struggle

Very insightful poem of the two sides to life.I love how you went fro dark to light as the real life is manifest this way. A great inspiring read, well penned

Wonderful verse of the two sides of feelings. Great use of images - dark as ground/ light as rose petals. For every dark day, a lighter day is coming very inspiring verse. :)

Good presentation of two sides. Nice poem and well penned too. Wisdom is shown greatly. Enjoyed reading it

How creatively you show the two sides of choice and falling and rising to our negative and positive experiences. I also feel in death your philosophy applies as well. To go to the love and light and not linger in negativity is the way to go, I believe. A poem full of wisdom so excellently written. 10 love Karin

Wow this was great. Thank you for the read!

Very nice finely written. I hope I can write as magnificient as this. Wonderful portrayal of reality of life- ups and down. Oh briliant poet this is such a masterpiece! So 10!

a great work of art that describes the two sides of life the ups and downs great job!

i agree with you that sorrow and joy will constantly be the companions of love. good free verse of poetry.... cheers!

I love it, it has some real rhythm. Thank you for sharing.

'On Its Two Sides ' is defined with accuracy as the Poem's consensus is bound to a sanguinely sort of feller, and with the antagonists’ tale skiving towards Self-Motivational Poetry, the picture I got upon reading this was that of an impetus beyond the Gallows sort. In this it did indeed prove as being keen and with a fair share of originality to boot. Yet with the frustrated Protagonist, who I must add served quite fitting as a forerunner in being descendent upon morbid supremacy, what this verse brought to mind when reading was the story of Persephone; who, in being told as mythopoeic, was youth, sun, warmth, yet her death was the quenching of a bonfire in the middle of the Sahara. And to me at least, I can see this Poem highly correlating to reality's faux-pas relationship in the 'real reality'- and tho' most certainly did try, I still cannot argue as to this. Now, I won't relegate flow, rhymes ‘n’ all that, cos I can see you're pretty much lauded out on that aspect already...hehe. Therefore I'll only say the exemplum here was authentic and succeeded in being both mythical and real. Cool verse, one of which I jolly enjoyed knockin' around me head fer a spell. Keep well, 'Anna

perfect presentation of two sides.A nice write indeed.And thanks, Obinna for sharing.

well write dear Obinna, thanks for shring

Obina, the poem is well written and thoughtful too.

Obinna my friend...your poetry continues to shine with each new piece...there's a vision that opens the minds eye to your wisdom.. a great share for every reader with this brilliantly penned poem...your work is excellent....keep them coming my friend....10+++++