Tuesday, August 18, 2009

On Invisible Waves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Where shall I hide my dear secrets?
If my contours itself betrayed me,
By leaving a visible trace of emotions
With shape, smell and colour in total,
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Seema Aarella
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Deodath Debideen 31 October 2009

Poetic masters are great but honest writers tell their side too!

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Nalini Hebbar 26 October 2009

truly beautiful...very poetic and romantic...you do have a way with words...regards

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Reshma Ramesh 25 August 2009

bravo! seems....truly a great write...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 22 August 2009

Your power of expressions astonishing! 10+

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 21 August 2009

wonderful poem....truly amazing. very expressive.....and eloquent. thank you very much.

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Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 20 August 2009

a brilliant write...10++++++++

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Obinna Eruchie 20 August 2009

'! ! ! ...ON INVISIBLE WAVES', this is wonderfully expressed, Seema.

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Vaibhav Pandey 19 August 2009

an excellent poem ma'm...some awsome lines in there...lovely to read..10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 August 2009

each individuals perception is important...not only to that person but to the entire world...very sensible questions asked beautifully...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 August 2009

'What novelty shall I express to you? If you started reading my feelings Through the crystal ball of Your insightful mind, and Embarrass my deeply thought out poems By simply saying I knew that before.' great!

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Surya . 19 August 2009

a nice poem with lovely questions. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Surya . 19 August 2009

a nice poem with lovely questions. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Surya . 19 August 2009

a nice poem with lovely questions. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

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Deepti Agarwal 19 August 2009

Invisible waves..it creates.. a lovely work.. :)

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rajagopal haran 18 August 2009

in Tamil there is a saying ' vallavanukku pullum Aayudham' means for the mighty even grass is a weapon...a seemingly small subject but evoking lots of feeling...well engineered Seema

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Kesav Easwaran 18 August 2009

of unsung unwritten love poetry you were made to feel...good piece Seema...thanks...10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2009

another lovely love poem. If my contours itself betrayed me, pl make 'themselves' instead of itself. shan 10

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Catrina Heart 18 August 2009

wow....what a beauty what a poetry so lovely.............10++++++

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Melvin Banggollay 18 August 2009

Unseen waves of truth and beauty speaks of a charm of great poetry

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Siddharth Singh 18 August 2009

Very intense and profound. Great piece.

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Seema Aarella

Seema Aarella

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