Sunday, March 25, 2007

On Impulse Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s time to go.
The vacations over
and friends depart
to varied and distant places, far apart.
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David Taylor
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Michelle Tiddy 26 March 2007

Lovely poem with a tinge of regret. The things that one loses in moments of hesitation. M.

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Marci Made 25 March 2007

BONK! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ah, I think I've got it.............abit of a tease, but I am pleased. This touches on love so beautifully. In this case above, it appears that Impulse could lead to wonderful things. marci ann. :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 25 March 2007

Never ba afraid to show love... David 10

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Quality work, as can only be expected from your pen, David...Sometimes proactivity is a necessity, but aside from business i still go with whim, impulse & spontaneity over anything else...Solid Penning, my friend! ~ F.J.R. ~

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Declan McHenry 25 March 2007

A well caught moment David. What turns on each? The actual and the possible.

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