On His Grave... Comments

I am so touched! ........

Strong poetry in highly dramatic setting.Loved every bit of this poem starting with the moon's deception and finishing with the finest lines I'v seen yet on the connection between death and new life and the deep current of love that flows on no matter what.The emotion and grief of the woman is fully expressed as well as the sacredness of fatherhood.10.

nice creation of yours. touching.10+ i gave.

very touching....................10