Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, July 13, 2013

On His Grave Comments

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“Take him to burial ground”
He was not to be found
Doors remained locked from inside
He had taken journey to abide order
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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“Take him to burial ground” He was not to be found

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moving Dustin Schultz 13 hours ago It actually touched my heart!

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Where was this going? Catherine Gifford13 hours ago I'm normally not a harsh critic, but after the second stanza I lost you. I guess it's not my type of poem. Sorry that I didn't enjoy but by all means keep writing and expressing yourself!

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nice :) Mr AnimalX6 minutes ago : D Comment +1 good.

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Dakota Snow6 minutes ago really good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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