Wednesday, September 23, 2015

On Her Way To School Comments

Rating: 5.0

She followed the striped cat
Stepping slowly - one two three,
Then became bore to count more,
And left her school bag hanging
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Sanjukta Nag
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Valsa George 02 October 2015

The little girl, though got late in reaching the school, was gifted with the joy of seeing four little kittens in a basket! What a cute sight! Even at this age, I identify myself with that little girl! In my young days, birds and kittens used to fascinate me more than anything! Even now I try to take care of stray cats, for which I am often scolded by my husband as my son as a child had to take rabies injections for having been bitten by a cat! Enjoyed the poem Sanjukta!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 25 September 2015

Like a bright sunny day this poem reflects very amazing and vivid imagery about cats and little girl. ‘Cause she realized already, This joy is more genuine Than her lots of dolls & teddy. Having affection for animals and drawing such imagery speaks about natural flow of emotion. Very wise sharing....10

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Liza Sudina 25 September 2015

Cats are really very winsome! and ofcourse more genuinethan dolls!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 September 2015

Verily, adventurous and amusing

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2015

A sudden delicious treat; with the muse of love and care. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 24 September 2015

Reminded my school days, full of enthusiasm, naughtiness and playfulness..................The best teacher is life and the best way to learn is to learn from own experience by defying norms set by society/ sets of rules with Do's and Dont's.............Lovely satire tucked with emotions........Loved it

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 September 2015

Being careless and neglecting study sometimes is fun. Lovely drop. A kids is being careless going to school and it gives such a sweet feeling.

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Kaustubh Vadher 24 September 2015

It is very beautifully describing a little cute baby girl going to school!

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Bharati Nayak 23 September 2015

Wonderful poem about following one's heart!

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