On Her Course Comments
The sweet murmuring river
Gliding crystal clear
Moves on her course
With energetic force.
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your poem flows like a river too, , , nice work, , , , loved the last four lines a lot, , Towards the sea she surges With the sea she merges Her ego she submerges And so with glory emerges
your poem flows like a river too, , , nice work, , , , loved the last four lines a lot, , Towards the sea she surges With the sea she merges Her ego she submerges And so with glory emerges
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8/3/2025 3:42:35 PM # 1.0.0
Lovely flow and rhyme in this poem, and great imagery as well. Very well done.