Saturday, September 20, 2014

On Her Bed She Lay Comments

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On her bed she lay
Gaze fixed on the turmoiled branches outside
Still, vicious, wild & confused
Her heart's native tongue
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John Sky Dadzie 09 March 2015

On her bed she lay. Great exaggerations, thanks for Sharing friend

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2014

a nicely written poem on her bed she lay deep oceans run steady in her eyes

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Lily Mosweu

Lily Mosweu

Francistown, Botswana
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