Wednesday, January 1, 2020

On Growing Old Upon A Breeze Of Dignity Comments

Rating: 5.0

They sit together... back to back
at Briar Hills Park, on a metal bench
like bookends,
bristling from the icy steel
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
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Denis Mair 15 January 2020

I think you must have a close personal tie to one or both of these oldsters, otherwise how could you have caught the tone of their shared moments before sunset? Their Rohrsach-reading of clouds is a childlike game, only playable by two who share a rare rapport. Their dignity shows itself in acceptance and not finding fault. I like the detail of avoiding the inevitable meatloaf. A ten for well-savored moments!

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