On Growing Old Comments

A vivid and factual description of what the old age is like! What a graceful writing with so many metaphors and beauty, I really loved it.Deserves 10+

Alzheimers are happier than us…..as knowledgeless about good or bad….. What will come well … we can’t help… Poetically we can write in giga bytes… to siphon out some solace.. and you’ve done that. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Lingerie-IG* Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

Wiser now, ready to mount, Draws sword, charges forward, Marches in tantrum, nev'r look backward, Aging cannot daunt.........marches in tantru, and never look backward and age can't count... so this is philosophical message for not feeling age and remain active throught out the life... this is precious slogan and one must follow it.. beautiful verse... so powerrfull message.....10 read mine is an old age curse? ? ? ? oh, dear daughter

beautiful expressions and well crafted words gracious write.........

well, we have no choice but move forward. We will just go old gracefully. Anyway, we had the best times in our younger days, living and loving to the fullness. What can we ask for? LOL.. This is a real, wake up call or, say..a powerful message...

Wiser now, ready to mount, Draws sword, charges forward, Marches in tantrum, nev'r look backward, Aging cannot be daunt ------- hahaha with your poem i am not afraid to grow old...................10++++++++

this has reality..expressions are of real happenings, , everybody will reach that stage, , ''being old''...smart and nice piece..

Lovely piece, poignant too with excellent imagery...